This fotobabble makes me want to go to Bonnaroo so bad, maybe a little more excitement in your voice would be beneficial, but besides this it's a great piece.
I loved Bonnaroo when I went so I love this story idea. You didn't sound too excited until toward the end of the story, but you very clear and easy to understand.
This fotobabble makes me want to go to Bonnaroo so bad, maybe a little more excitement in your voice would be beneficial, but besides this it's a great piece.
ReplyDeleteGreat topic, it makes me want to know even more about the upcoming lineup. You sounded a little rushed/nervous when you begin speaking.
ReplyDeleteI loved Bonnaroo when I went so I love this story idea. You didn't sound too excited until toward the end of the story, but you very clear and easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteThe story itself was well written, and I felt your voice was pretty solid. Maybe a little more pitch variation would help, but still a good job!
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