Your lead was very intriguing and accompanied the photo. It was a very well written story.
The story is very intriguing and definitely catches the readers attention, if it were real I would say more specific details, like what the rovers name was and how long it was on Mars. Very good choice on your topic.
Interesting story! It felt believable, and the lead was well written.
Great topic! Definitely leaves the audience wanting to hear a continuing story.
Interesting story! I like how you commented on this since rovers are being sent into space to see if there is other life in our solar system.
I really liked the lead. The story was intriguing and caught my attention!
Your lead was very intriguing and accompanied the photo. It was a very well written story.
ReplyDeleteThe story is very intriguing and definitely catches the readers attention, if it were real I would say more specific details, like what the rovers name was and how long it was on Mars. Very good choice on your topic.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story! It felt believable, and the lead was well written.
ReplyDeleteGreat topic! Definitely leaves the audience wanting to hear a continuing story.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story! I like how you commented on this since rovers are being sent into space to see if there is other life in our solar system.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the lead. The story was intriguing and caught my attention!
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