Your lead did exactly what it was supposed to do. It made me want to listen to the rest of your story and provided the appropriate information. Good job!
The lead fits the story! All quotes and facts were very informing on the situation and you're ending was perfect by quoting one of her songs but adding a little humor to her rage she has been on.
Your lead did exactly what it was supposed to do. It made me want to listen to the rest of your story and provided the appropriate information. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour lead got my attention! This is a good story for those who keep up with celebrities and entertainment news. Also, I really like your last line.
ReplyDeleteYour ending was hilarious! I agree with the previous comments. The lead really grabbed my attention and kept me wanting to listen for more.
ReplyDeleteThis is a funny story! I like how you picked someone who is prominent in the media's bad light and added to it. Great recording voice!
ReplyDeleteThe lead fits the story! All quotes and facts were very informing on the situation and you're ending was perfect by quoting one of her songs but adding a little humor to her rage she has been on.
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